日常不可能一帆风顺,你会遇见大大小小的挑战。请自拟题目,依据需要及要素写一篇英语短文。
要素:你遇见的挑战是什么
你是如何去面对这个挑战的
你的感受是什么
The challenge I've met
My middle school life will come to an end. Thinking back to the threeyears, the challenge I've faced is how to improve my study.
When I first entered the middle school, I felt so puzzled that Icouldn't get along well with my study. Even worse, I once failed to pass theexam. I felt very sad and disappointed. In order to change the situation, Imade plans to ask the teachers for some advice and tried my best to solveproblems with classmates. Gradually, I not only got used to the pace, but alsoI could catch up with others. Besides,now I'm the TOP student in the school.
It's very important for everyone to stick to their dreams. If youreally put your heart into what you want to get, you can challenge and make itdefinitely.
怎么看1:依据第二段落中的内容,题目中challenge 后的定语从句应该改为一般过去式,而非目前完成时;相应第一段最后一句中的is应该改为was,同样依据第二段内容,这里的“挑战”英是与目前无关联的过去。
怎么看2:将题目中challenge后的定语从句改为目前完成进行时,即The challengeI've been facing,当然,正文内容对challenge的描写要用目前时态。
怎么看3:原文中最后一句...but also I could catch up with others...中的could改为was able to catchup with others..才符合文义,由于应该理解成具体的“能”。
怎么看4:第二段第一句entered the middle school中的the去掉更适合
以上是我的考虑,不知是不是正确。请专家老师给予指导,十分感谢。
这是学生的小作文叫你改吗?来源是什么?这个文章错误太多了。后面看到作者自称是now I'm the TOP student in the school,让我吃惊不小。