Part Ⅳ Error Correction
The place of the child in society has varied1 for thousands of years
and has been effected by different cultures and religions. In ancient --71--
times unwanted children were occasionally abandoned, put to death,
exploiting or offered for religious sacrifices, and in any event a --72--
large percentage of them didnt survive their physically2 hazardous
existence to reach to maturity3.--73--
In western civilization within the last , there
have been many changes in attitude with the young. In agricultural --74--
Europe, and later with the beginning of the Industrial Revolution,
the children of the poor work long hours for little or no pay, and --75--
there was no public concern on their safety or welfare punishment --76--
could be brutal4 and severe.
By the eighteenth century the harsh and severe methods began to
show any change. Society slowly accorded children a role of --77--
importance. Books were written expressly for them and gradually
laws were passing for their protection. Efforts were made to create --78--
for them a life better than their parents!
In the past few decades parents have become more and more attentive5
for the needs of their children.Better health care is available and --79--
education is no longer reserving for the children from wealthy families. --80--
内容概要:几千年来，孩子在社会的地位不尽相同，这主如果受不同文化和宗教的影响。在古时候，不想要的孩子有时被抛弃，被处死，被剥削，甚至被用作宗教祭品。在近几百年来，在西方对孩子态度有了非常大的改变，但孩子们常常长期工作而得到极少或几乎没报酬。直到近期，才有法律保护未成年人，使得他们有同意医疗和教育的机会。
71.effectedaffected词性错误。effect 是名词，影响，而此处需要动词，因此改作affect v.
72.exploitingexploited语态错误。此处需要被动语态，由于孩子们是被剥削。
73.to to及物动词使用方法错误。reach 是及物动词，后应接宾语，而无需介词。
74.withtoward介词搭配错误。attitude 后接介词toward。
75.workworked时态错误。此处应用一般过去时才符合全篇的安排。
76.onfor介词搭配错误。concern 后接for 表示对表示关注
77.anysome词汇使用方法错误。any只用于疑问句和否定句，而some 一般用于一定句。
78.passingpassed语态错误。此处需要被动语态，而不是主动语态。
79.forto介词固定搭配。attentive 后接介词to。
80.reservingreserved语态错误。此处需要被动语态。
