August and Septemberare the months of the year, during which most English people take their holidays.
老师好,which指代主语August and September,还是指代表语the months of the year?还是皆可?
during which...这个定语从句是the months of the year的限制性定语,没这个定语从句,主句就失去了交流意义,等于在说废话。所以原句中的逗号为错误,需要删去逗号。